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What a lovely, comforting piece. A great reminder of unconditional love. This piece touched my heart today.
This touched me. I love the "heart conversations" with our children. How much more with our Lord? Just beautiful.
Beautiful. The parallel between the first section and the section section, with it coming back to your children at the end was very effective. The message of God's (and a mother's) unfailing love was really beautiful.
What a heartfelt piece! Great comparison of how we want our kids to know we're always there to how hard God tries to get us to realize the same about Him. I needed to read this today. Thanks for posting - it truly touched me and makes me want to pay closer attention to what God is whispering to my heart.
Blessings, Lynda
This is beautiful and I, too, needed this today as I worry about a teenage daughter. God's love will hold us up! Thank you and God bless you.
Beautiful. The first sentance caught me and the rest drew me along. Well done!
This is ever-so-tender and touching. Beautifully written, I especially liked "The silence in my heart spoke only of His presence." That's a phrase to meditate on...
The brevity and simplicity of this piece speaks volumes. My favourite line: "I closed my eyes, wanting to see more clearly." Simply beautiful!
Short, sweet and well done.
Beautiful. This one touched my heart.
Yes, I too especially like the image of closing eyes to see more clearly. You've captured the longing of a mother's heart beautifully!
So few words... so much meaning. Very nicely done. It really spoke of tenderness. Excellent!
Very poetic. Beautiful job.