The Official Writing Challenge
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Ah, yes, we've all been there haven't we! Very apt echoing of the thoughts and feelings of the heart!!
02/20/06
Yes - we've all been there without realizing we're already broken. Broken in our own unique ways. And 'pain and misery' are the clouds that block the warmth of the Sun - but It is always there - no matter what.
02/21/06
A stirring piece, well worked. You could feel the other's pain in their calling out... Good Job, Moon.