The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/06
Very clever take on this verse and on the theme, and very nicely portrayed. Congratulations.
02/17/06
That was a very uplifting read! I liked the play on the words "Bruce" and "bruise", and it was a clever ending. To feel that special - that God knows our name - really good stuff.
02/17/06
Rich descriptions. Very clever. Took me a moment to figure out why Bruce was too dumb to get out of the way of the chair. LOL!
02/18/06
Very creative take on that verse! I love how you showed the gardener as God, taking care of us.