The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/06
Nice story -- well told with realistic dialogue.
02/16/06
Good job! Poor little guy...nice characterizations here.
02/16/06
Great story. I really like the touch of humor at the end where he smiled with his tothless grin.
02/17/06
Nice story. Isn't it always the way that we try to blame and get impatient when we don't have all the facts. Good job!
02/17/06
A very nice story - love the smile at the end :)
How realistic! This is how most of us really are, or atleast me. Jump to conclusions and have pre conceived ideas and notions. Your article gives a very clear example of man's folly and also the need to clear our minds of prejudices and judgements. A good write! Keep it up. I loved it. Jesus loves you very much... He always has and always will!

With love in Jesus,

Amanda