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Beautiful! The God of the impossible at work! Prayer, time and God - you have painted a beautiful picture of restoration and hope. Just great!
A beautiful story of redemption. The line, "On a little used street on the wrong side of decision, she found her Damascus Road," bears repeating - it is lyrical.
This whole entry is wonderful, but the poem in particular touched my heart. Thank you so much!
Absolutely wonderful. I have written briefly on the same subject and I truly appreciate the message you have put forth.
Very touching. Beautifully written.
I agree with Leslie - that was my favourite line, too. This story was touching even when I assumed it was fiction. Your conclusion made it a beautiful testimony of God's grace and unfailing love. Well done!
What a testimony to the love and forgiveness of God. You have blessed us greatly by sharing this story. Thank you.
Benj, ya done good. This is touching and polished and all there. It was presented with a straightforward compassion that made me really pull for the girl. Good work.
What an inspirational piece - a wonderful story of a real-life prodigal, woven with the undeniable mercy and love of Jesus Christ. I was captivated from beginning to end. I can't see how this one could get any better. I hope to see it in the winner's circle.
What a testament of what God can do if we let Him.