The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
A seductive real life situation shown here in this creative entry. Very practical warning! Well done!!
02/07/06
Very unique, compelling and powerful. Well done.
02/11/06
Very good job at depicting the self deception that is involved with this kind of mistake. I enjoyed your format and liked how she blamed the guy in the end. Very realistic.
02/11/06
I loved this entry! Very powerful. Realistic emotions and thoughts - isn't that just how the devil works. He deceives us into actually justifying our actions and truly believing that it won't hurt. Wonderful work. Creative and clever take on "Control."
02/11/06
What a clever idea, to write this story as a stream-of-consciousness poem. Powerfully done.
02/11/06
Wow! Great entry! Seeing it all put together so succinctly really emphasizes your point. And it's a vital message to anyone who's starting to think along those lines.
02/11/06
Very good. Very realistic on how people justify such little things.
02/11/06
Yikes, you did that so well I was right inside her head! A hard hitting, effective look at how easy it is to deceive ourselves and then, when every thing falls down around our ears, blame somebody else. Yeggy
02/13/06
Wow, well done, Sally! Like a river, these thoughts flow along....leading to.....trouble! Well executed and totally believable.