The Official Writing Challenge
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Hello friend,
How true this is! We try to take control over everything in our life. If only we'd trust in Jesus! And by the way, if there's a paid vacancy at the circus, I'll join you. I'm a 'house wife' with two kids and a T.V. addict for a husband (who, I must say is the clown in our home circus. Our kids just adore him!)
Keep up the good work. Jesus loves you very very much.
02/08/06
Windows…? What windows? Very nicely done.
02/11/06
Well written. I was drawn in, held on until the end, to see how the dilemma was solved. It was satisfying in that the answer is simple... but not easy.
02/11/06
Your 4th paragraph is great! Nice voice, very witty and charming.
02/11/06
Ah, Jo. This entry is so YOU! I would have guessed even if I hadn't read your hint. :-) Wonderful, witty writing as always. I thoroughly enjoyed it. But I think I saw a little dust in paragraph two (put away the dust rag - I was just kidding LOL)
02/11/06
You were right, I pegged ya right away. Good writing as always.(:
This is a really cute one, Jo! Can't say I've ever been in your shoes though. A little dust doesn't bother me (until company's coming! LOL) and I've got a hubby who pitches right in, always has (Thank you, MIL!). You've done a great job on this entertaining and enlightening entry!!
R-E-L-A-X....! There's no dust in heaven, and if this life is all about preparing for eternity, then why practice DUSTING?!?!

Cute entry w/ a good point.
02/13/06
Swiffer?
You are a kindred spirit with my wife, Jo. Great article!
Remember: I'm in my happy place, I'm in my happy place.
Always a pleasure to read your work.
Great job, Jo! Hehe, I love the line, "Does He do windows?" LOL
02/18/06
Finally made it to your entry, Jo! Still got a smile on my face. Oh, boy, have I been there and done that! I'm with Amy for favourite lines. Thanks for this enlightening and enjoyable read, Soooo good to hear your'voice' again. Yeggy.