The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/06
A well written piece that made me feel involved.
Would you consider ending the story on the second last paragraph, as it contains the climax and end of the story, which says...the Spirit said.
I enjoyed reading the piece.
02/10/06
This is an interesting take on the topic. I like the analogy of the ocean, seemingly an insurmountable obstacle, being an interruption to the journey of life. I noticed a few small typos, but overall, this was well-written.
Like the concept and portrayal of overwhelming victory in Christ. Not sure how I feel about the line, "I am just like God." That's a pretty strong statement! I enjoyed reading this.