The Official Writing Challenge
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You painted this picture of torture well. I hope you find relief.
02/08/06
I like how you turned the migraine into a character in your story. Ugh, talk about lack of control. I can't even imagine. Good job.
02/10/06
I have migraines occassionally, but mine don't talk to me for some reason. LOL The story seemed to be flawlessly written. Thank you for sharing! littlelight
I thought I was reading an action packed thriller...good job!
02/11/06
Very well personified. Chilling. Appears to be written from experience whether personal or observed.
Wow! Gives me something else to be very thankful for...I don't suffer from migranes. You've shown the reality of them in this story. VERY skillfully written!
Enjoyed the personification. Well done! I felt the despair...the total lack of control. My hubby has had migraines in the past, so I understand how debilitating they can be. You did a great job with the taunting "voice!"