The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
LOL! I was drawn to this entry because I almost submitted an entry titled, "Remote Controlled," with a similar theme. But I had trouble with the ending and went with something else. Now I know why! A great story had already been written about the remote control! Great story - too funny.
02/06/06
Well done! Cute twist to the ending!
02/06/06
Cute story...like the last line! Good job!
02/11/06
I smiled from beginning to end--loved it! I could just visualize every step, and the sweet implication of married hijinks at the end was a perfect touch, handled beautifully.
Funny, well written.
Cute, refreshing, and playful...all the way! Left me with a grin. :-)