The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/06
Frustrating story. Ministry is hard. Reminds me of so many churches. The story wasn't clear to me though. Who was right? Who was wrong? What is the conclusion?
Lots of emotion and well-stated conflict. I was left hanging...had a little trouble finding resolution. Still, good expression and unique style.
02/14/06
Actually, Lynda, I did think your story had a beginning and end. Your character realizing she was out of line was a satisfactory conclusion for me. A hint: if your character asks someone a question and it's answered you don't need to say 'replied the other girl.'