The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, you've allowed us to revisit this wonderful story that we all love! Enjoyed your link to the topic 'control'! Thank you!
Nice poem. It was very cleverly written. Line 9 could be tightened up a little more to flow with the rest of the poem, but I loved the rest of the poem. Good work!
Very nice story!
02/09/06
Good work! I envy anyone who can write poetry!! :)
02/10/06
I like most Noah's Ark tales n poems. I agree that line 9 could be tighter, but all round nice work on the poem. God bless, littlelight
Nicely done! I'm sure if we could hear Noah's testimony it would be one of submitting to God's control!! :-)