The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
Oh, you've allowed us to revisit this wonderful story that we all love! Enjoyed your link to the topic 'control'! Thank you!
02/06/06
Nice poem. It was very cleverly written. Line 9 could be tightened up a little more to flow with the rest of the poem, but I loved the rest of the poem. Good work!
02/08/06
Very nice story!
02/09/06
Good work! I envy anyone who can write poetry!! :)
02/10/06
I like most Noah's Ark tales n poems. I agree that line 9 could be tighter, but all round nice work on the poem. God bless, littlelight
02/11/06
Nicely done! I'm sure if we could hear Noah's testimony it would be one of submitting to God's control!! :-)