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This is a beautiful portrait of how we often isolate ourselves from others but Jesus breaks down those walls to bring us life. I love the first paragraph describing the walls, also the description of the one way windows and door that only opened from the inside! Good writing!
01/31/06
This reminds me of how it felt to be without God and also how wonderful it was when Jesus invaded my space. Beautiful.
02/01/06
I loved your descriptions of oneself before Jesus. Wonderful ending! Very unique take on the topic. I enjoyed this.
Very good, and very incisive. God bless.
02/03/06
"Their feelings didn't matter; only mine mattered." Contrast that with the hinges breaking at the end. Excellent transformation! Good job!
Great portrayal of the human condition. We all are guilty of building walls around us - at least to some extent. You did a great job describing the turmoil. Keep writing.