The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/06
This is a beautiful portrait of how we often isolate ourselves from others but Jesus breaks down those walls to bring us life. I love the first paragraph describing the walls, also the description of the one way windows and door that only opened from the inside! Good writing!
01/31/06
This reminds me of how it felt to be without God and also how wonderful it was when Jesus invaded my space. Beautiful.
02/01/06
I loved your descriptions of oneself before Jesus. Wonderful ending! Very unique take on the topic. I enjoyed this.
02/03/06
Very good, and very incisive. God bless.
02/03/06
"Their feelings didn't matter; only mine mattered." Contrast that with the hinges breaking at the end. Excellent transformation! Good job!
02/03/06
Great portrayal of the human condition. We all are guilty of building walls around us - at least to some extent. You did a great job describing the turmoil. Keep writing.