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01/31/06
Interesting evangelistic story! This is the first ever Christian sci-fi I have read. Good description and pretty good dialogue. I liked the "red thundering eye" reference and the mention of mythology where Jupiter and Io got their names.
I enjoyed this. Good job!
02/03/06
A job well done. Sci-fi with a Christian message is very hard to do... but you pulled it off just fine! The visuals of the giant red eye were right on. Keep it up!
02/04/06
I really enjoyed this (being the scifi fan that I am :) Well done -I liked the static being broken up by the voice. Wonderful descriptions.