The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/06
Thank you for sharing this story of love and grief. It touched my heart and moved to prayer. God bless!
02/01/06
You wrote such a realistic portrayal of pain and loss. Thank you! It kept my attention and the ending was perfect.
02/04/06
I really empathised with you throughout that piece. The temptation to love so exclusively and fear the loss of that person. I have to push myself out to meet people, knowing that i could fall into that same trap.