The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/06
Good job on this one. Sounds like you've been in that place yourself once or twice.
Intriguing free verse poem! 'Permission will not be granted to land your ideas on the runway of my mind,' Love that image! The outstretched measuring arm and finger early in the poem sets the tone throughout. I really enjoyed reading this!
02/02/06
Wonderful. I'm picky about my poetry, and this one really grabbed me. Good job.
02/06/06
A great take on the topic, brilliantly worded, and a poignant message. Fabulous!
Great message!
02/07/06
I'm sure this poem reflects the feelings of many. Good job!
02/08/06
Wow, this is so good. Excellent work, Melanie.
05/19/16
Beautiful and painful writing. So many people live like this, even Christians.

~Blessings