The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
A good story. And I like the ending for there should always be room for one more.
02/01/06
Sweet story!
02/02/06
Neat finish and nicely done throughout. A couple of details easily fixed—I don't think you meant to say that this lady was writing for a "fictional" magazine, unless it was imaginary - fiction magazines I think is what you want. And, though I didn't double check I think you meant: "hide nor hair". But none of that takes away from a good read.
02/04/06
Very sweet story, but could use some editing throughout. Thanks for sharing this delightful slice of life.