The Official Writing Challenge
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What insight! What an analogy! I loved it. Anyone with a past "mistake" will relate to this "masterpiece". Excellent work!
01/31/06
Very creative, like a beautiful painting.
02/01/06
Oh wow! Every sentence was beautifully written!You wove this story like art as well! A pleasure to read! Loved the name Jolie as well..have a sister with that name:)
02/01/06
Fairly well written, the POV shifts bothered me somewhat. A very insightful article.
02/03/06
Some complex sentence structure. Very difficult topic to tackle. Good entry!
02/04/06
Very nicely written on a very fragile subject. I loved the piece! It was masterfully done, and written beautifully. I loved the ending, ...she would repeat what her father had said. Thank you.