The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/06
Funny! Just like a kid too, to ask something that would cause a huge explaination from mommy or daddy, and then the quesiton turns out to be something so much simplier.
Enjoyed this story!
Thanks for writing it.
01/31/06
Oh, this is delightful! What a fun little conversation between mother and son. And that ending is so typical of children. It's funny 'cause it's true!
A really sweet converssation between mother and son and how well did the mother handle the situation.
02/02/06
A sweet and touching story. It put a smile on my face!
02/02/06
Loved it! great ending :)
02/02/06
I love this--Mickey talks like a real 5-year-old, and the mother is wise and sweet. Cute ending, too.
02/02/06
This inspires me to seek out more precious moments with my own children. Perfect, LOL ending!
Like this one heaps. Authentic voices, lovely tempo and a genuine 'aahh' and a smile at the end. God bless.
02/04/06
One of your best ones, Dub. Wouldn't be surprised to see this in the circle at the end of the week... or the beginning of teh next...lol! The kid seemed real and the dialogue kept things moving right along. Keep it up, my friend!
So precious! Yes, I could literally hear the child's voice in my head so clearly thanks to your skillful writing! You have such a way of making characters come alive!