The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/06
How poetic your prose rendition of this article. The Creator inspired you to write in such beautiful language an overview of this history of creation that we need to seriously consider. You have set it down in such an exalting manner that I feel compelled to read it again.
02/02/06
Poetical indeed. With a little more care with punctuation and some editing here and there, this will be a good as Paradise once was. Nice work.
02/02/06
Wow -great detail and creativity. (spaces between the paragraphs will make an easier read). I enjoyed this!
02/02/06
Very visual and poetic! I wonder if you should end with the cry of victory...it seems like the prose shifts after that, into another style altogether.

For your readers' sake, an extra space between paragraphs, please?

Wonderful descriptiveness.
02/04/06
First ... White Space is important!

Beyond presentation, however.. very poetic... original, interesting. Your use of descriptive prose is wonderful! Keep it up!