The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
Nice little story. Being left behind is not always so bad. There are some biblical lessons to be learnt as well.
01/30/06
Nice little story. I enjoyed it.
01/30/06
I loved this, and enjoyed reading it.
01/30/06
Cute.
Quotation marks for speech are double, "like this ". The other quote mark is this 'one', which is used in England for famous/book quotes, but in the US only for possesive nouns like Susie's.
02/01/06
Yes, this was a cute story. There were lots of spelling and punctuation problems though. Try taking a little more time to edit and it will be even better. Keep writing!