The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/06
Good twist at the end. It was very hard for me to imagine that a summer romance would be yearned for after so many decades. The theme wasn't very noticeable either.
01/26/06
Beautiful story of young love; perhaps the subject matter is in the fact that Jane awakens to reality with a "start": but often a First Love is the one love that is never forgotten. Thanks for sharing.