The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/06
This was lovely.
01/23/06
Exceptionally written. I enjoyed it. You brought your character alive. Great work!
01/23/06
Oops! You know what I mean :)
01/26/06
From the START to the Finish - you captured my attention! Great story, great object lesson and great ending! I loved it! Super writing! God bless!
01/27/06
Great story - I can relate. I like the present tense.