The Official Writing Challenge
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Great take on the biblical story. It carried me along with it -- well done!
You really brought this story to life with body language and dialog. It made me feel like I was right there. You nailed the topic while delivering a clear message. I especially liked how different Mary was after being with Jesus.
10/11/19
Powerful and well done!!

Blessings~
10/17/19
I love 'new' stories of the Biblical event! Great work!
10/17/19
Congrats on your EC. Well done.
10/18/19
I enjoyed your perspective on the scuttlebutt that would have preceded our Lord everywhere he traveled.
Congratulations on your win.