The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh this was painful to read, but you did a great job telling it.
08/02/19
Your descriptions brought me right to the mill. I loved the gentle interaction with Harrington and Jonathan. I'd love to see where you take that relationship.
08/03/19
A powerful story! Well done!
08/03/19
Wow!
Well done,
Blessings~
Is this the ending of chapter one? Where does it go from here? Does the son ever decide he wants to change some things? What troubles does this bring?
08/08/19
Great job with the story and character development! So heartbreaking!
08/22/19
Thank you all for your kind comments. I have a new historical fiction percolating in my head. I like to use the Challenge to flesh out some of my ideas for it!