The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/19
There are so many things I love about this piece. "There are potholes in Ohio", caught me off guard. What an understatement! And it made me laugh.
Great imagery throughout the piece but I loved the "California style". Really brought the picture home.
This was a very nice memory. Thanks for sharing it.
07/19/19
A powerful and well-written piece. Good job!
07/21/19
Awwww. I loved this story so much.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

Blessings~
07/25/19
A beautiful piece with such blessed memories. Well done.