The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/06
Hey, I like this. Great ending!
01/26/06
Poetically speaking, the first few verses were nicely done; but then the last one lost it's rhythm...; however, the theme was great, the artistic talent is there, and I liked it! Thank you for sharing your God given talent with your peers. God bless.
I agree with Marilyn - the last stanza threw me off a bit, but it captured very well the voice of a man who finds it hard to believe that he is not master of himself. Lots to really like about this. God bless