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Wow! What a twist on the story. Everything was going along fine until the raining of fish. I began to think that this must be an allegory, and tried to figure it out. Well done!
04/26/19
What a great take on the topic. I do know that many occurrences of fish and frogs raining down have been reported from different countries. Great dialogue, too.
I liked the flow of your story and the character development.

I had never heard of fish falling from the sky.

Nice twist on the fishy xtory.
04/27/19
Excellent job with this!
Blessings~
04/28/19
I loved the surprise of raining fish! Great story!
This is a great story. I've heard about similiar phenomenon. This is a fresh take on the topic. The characters are darling and the message strong. Good job.