The Official Writing Challenge
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03/08/19
I enjoyed the approach to the topic in your piece through content and delivery.

I loved the part about Pop Tarts!

And, of course the great ending and message overall.

Blessings~
Unique take on the topic. For me, the many cliches were too much. I would have loved to hear more fully, about the missed Pop Tarts, or some other aspect of food/ custom that was different in the country.