The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute poem with a good message!
Very good, lighthearted, but with a lovely message.
A great poem! Great rhyme and rhythym...and also a great message! I loved it! I am so grateful that God finished the Plan of Salvation for us - and didn't throw in the towel before it was finished. I thank Him every day! And thank you for sharing this delightful poem with your peers. Well done!
So many truths wrapped in a well written, very readable, enjoyable poem. Loved your unforced rhymes. Yeggy
This was lovely. Can I suggest that you send this to a magazine? Many publishers are looking for fillers and I think this would be great. We all have unfinished projects - writers or not. Well done.