The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/19
Good reminders on controlling our words. Thought-provoking piece.
This is a powerful piece. You remind me a bit of my sister. She often hurts my feelings, but would never do so intentionally. Having some smoother transitions in between the stories might bring it all together a bit better. I really like your message and including the verse you pray at the end is a great thing too.
I enjoyed your story, and cringed when your friend returned. Good job!