The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/19
Reality check to many people I'm sure.
01/17/19
This story is definitely on topic. Perhaps in order to show rather than tell there could have been dialogue between husband and wife. Thanks for sharing.
01/19/19
Really enjoyed this whole piece, nicely done!

God Bless~
Good story line. I would have liked to peek into the couple's lives to get a better feel of the conflict. Maybe some dialog. Good ending.
This is a great story. I think you nailed the topic and did a nice job with a strong message. Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level and 21 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards. Happy Dance!