The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/18
Entertaining - all those adventurous opportunities!
12/07/18
Nicely done. Good flow of conversation kept this piece moving forward at a good pace. I never thought much about teaching overseas and the stimulating experiences that go along with it! Sounds very appealing. Thanks
12/08/18
I like the way you provided so much information about teaching opportunities overseas in story form.
Maybe a little bit of overkill in spelling out that every one would be an adventure. Sometimes it's a good idea to describe it and let the reader come to the conclusion that this would be an adventure.
But I thought it was very entertaining and interesting. Good writing.
12/08/18
Great job of helping us feel Rachel's excitement and letting us experience the anticipation of her adventure.