The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/06
'May today become the birth
Of a brand-new love I sing
As I lift my voice to You
I will let my praises ring'

Beautiful! I love this stanza! Delightful poem.
01/24/06
Nice effort here!:) A few of the phrases seemed contrived and the rhythm was a little bumpy in spots, but I loved the theme.
01/25/06
Wonderful prayer, a great day-starter!
01/26/06
Very nicely done!
01/27/06
Very nicely done.
01/27/06
This is delightful. A truely inspiring read. Poetically, the only thing that jarred for me was the You/You rhyme in the last verse. Yeggy
02/07/06
Poetry, Amy? Wow! And such great content too, as well as the way it flowed.

Well done!