The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/18
A good story that has the makings for a novel. Good writing. God bless.
10/19/18
Great job developing the action and describing the path of the mc. The beginning interaction took a little while to grasp as it seemed like Liz was the good one at first. Maybe add a description tag for her? How her voice sounded or expression looked?
I wonder if this is purely fiction or if it is a testimony. Either way it's very encouraging. I love stories about God redeeming impossible messes. It beings hope to others who feel they've messed up 'too bad'. Thank you.
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