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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Start (01/16/06)

TITLE: Life After Lunch ( The High Cost Of Dining Out)
By Kenny Blade
01/17/06


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For years now, I have been accompanying my beautiful bride to church. Some guys think church is a waste of time. Personally, I think that a fellow should attend church. Itís good for the soul, as my wife says. Our pastor once told me a manís aim should be to meet with God and find our rest in Him. Seeing as I believe the Bible to be the inerrant word of God, I completely agree. That is why, just like clock-work for as long as I can remember, Iíve been meeting Him in the sanctuary at 11:00am Sunday mornings and finding my rest until around noon when the choir wakes me up with their closing number. The benediction I think itís called.

I must admit that my wife has never been all that thrilled with my snoring ( I breathe heavy. She tends to exaggerate) through services. Still, Itís a routine that worked for me. That was until the recent retirement of our pastor. Forty years he had been there. Great preacher. I loved his style of preaching. The sound of his voice was like rain on an old tin roof. The sandman and I were usually prayer partners before he had thanked Miss Edna for her beautiful solo.

All good things must come to an end, as the scripture says. 1st Peter, I think. Might have been Buck Owens now that I think of it. Whichever, the arrival of our new pastor brought an abrupt end to my days of slumber. The wife made me promise Iíd stop sleeping in service. She said the old pastor didnít mind because he knew how I was, and besides, he was so blind he couldnít see a fly if it landed on his glasses lens.

I discovered quickly that first Sunday my promise would be hard NOT to keep. Everything about the new pastor was loud. His Voice. His laugh. His suit. A nice guy, but that voice of his could scramble an egg while it was still in the chicken! Resigned to my fate, I settled in to hear what he had to say. His first sermon was titled: ďHow we began - The story of Adam and EveĒ. At least, I thought to myself, he was doing me the courtesy of starting over in Genesis. That way, I really hadnít missed anything while I was sleeping all those years.

I listened pretty closely. After all, I figured that Adam was the first guy ever married to a woman with no girlfriends who pointed out all of his inadequacies. That in itself was pretty interesting. The pastor went on (and on) for the next hour or so explaining how Adam and Eve fell from grace because of their disobedience to God. I really thought remaining conscious would get boring. Turns out, the story of Adam and Eve really answered a lot of questions for me.

It seems they lived in a really nice garden home in this place called paradise. They were naked, jobless and never got old. Note to anyone thinking of asking me my definition of a perfect world: See previous sentence. Anyway, it seems one day Adam was watching the Lions and the Bears (literally), just minding his own business. It must have been suppertime because Eve was standing there with the garden gate open trying to decide what to cook. After a few minutes, she slams the gate and proclaims that she doesnít feel like cooking and she wants to go out to eat. Dismayed by the fact that she was interrupting his Sunday afternoon rest (It must have been Sunday. Everything religious happens on Sunday) he tells her he isnít going anywhere.

Well, to make a long story short, Eve storms out. A couple of hours later, Adam gets hungry and begins looking for something to eat. Eve arrives back with this apple
(Pastor says it probably wasnít an apple, but I think it was. The picture in our Sunday School class showed one) Eve offers Adam half. Heís starving. He takes one bite. One bite! Now Godís mad at them, she has nothing to wear, he has to go to work and babies are everywhere! Pastor says the moral of the story is we should obey God. Iím sure heís right. I think thereís another moral:

Plan your meals ahead of time!

Next week pastor is telling the story of Noah. I think he was the founder of PETA. Should be interesting.


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Chelsea Pietsch01/23/06
I loved the style of your writing (very easy to read and entertaining) and the original angle as well. Thanks :)
Cassie Memmer01/23/06
Hilarious, yet written very well. A fun read. I want to read more of this fellow's adventures in church and elsewhere! Keep them coming!
Kirralie Smith01/24/06
Love it, thanks for the giggle.
Karri Compton01/24/06
Very funny - good job.
Marilyn Schnepp 01/24/06
Funny, Funny! I laughed the hardest about the preacher that could scramble an egg even before the chicken laid it! Anyway, it was hilariously funny, and such an enjoyable and entertaining read! I too - can't wait for your "take" on the Noah story! Loved this one. This humor isn't sacriligious - as you never make fun of God...just characters like us. Great Job!!!!
Kris St. James01/25/06
Very funny!! If we can't laugh at ourselves, there's no hope! You definately should write a collumn somewhere? Do you have an online blog?
Lynda Schultz 01/26/06
One minor thing in an otherwise very good piece. It has to do with agreement: "a man's aim Ö find HIS rest". Very enjoyable.
janet rubin01/27/06
I loved it! Really fun.
Shari Armstrong 01/28/06
This is great! Very well done -the humor is great :) (My Dad was never sleeping, he was "checking his eyelids for pinholes")
Cheryl Harrison 01/28/06
Funny! I loved the line where you said he was watching the Lions and the Bears... hehe. Another moral - Never go shopping while you are hungry. Good job!
Pat Guy 01/28/06
My favorite part is the ending! Great humor and talented useage of words to accomplish this! An enjoyable a fun read. It tickles the innerds!
Debbie Sickler01/30/06
I enjoyed this from the title to the last word. It was so funny and well written. Great job! Thanks for the laugh.
Jessica Schmit01/30/06
Good job Kenny on placing in the top 30 entries! This peice was very entertaining, like usual. I think I've managed to spot your peice in "space."