The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/18
Good job recounting the craziness of that moment and that time. It's awesome to hear how God provided.

On a writing note, I would have enjoyed getting clued in on which country you were in a little sooner, such as mentioning that you were walking into your house in Kenya.
06/17/18
This is an interesting story:-). A couple things that need to be fixed: A bedroom that looks like a bonfire? And I definitely had the impression you were in the States on furlough when this was happening, which made the difficulty with purchasing a bra a little confusing. I mention these things only because I think the story is interesting enough to be told clearly - so just do a little editing.