The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the straightforward telling of your your story. It fit with the era. Good writing with a great lesson.
This story really got me in. I wanted to know what happened. At first I wasn't entirely sure if you were fictionalising a true story or whether it was fiction, but I think you did a good job. It has a good message about how people can change through prayer and the love of those around them. Good job.
06/07/18
Good job with the voice and development of this story. It was easy to see the town and the characters through your writing.
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 13th overall. Happy Dance!