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01/16/06
This is fascinating! It's hard to believe that it's modern day. The story is really well-written and gripping (despite the 2 typos). ;-)
01/16/06
This home schooling mother appreciated your story. Thanks. Just like Christian persecution around the world, this struggle isn't one people are aware of.
01/16/06
Wow - at first I thought this was a future-tale. Very well done!
01/17/06
Excellent writing and a great wake-up call.
01/19/06
Amazing story! It's something that we must all be aware of, especially since the direction of the U.S. might eventually go this way. Thanks for such a stirring piece!
Pat Guy  
01/19/06
Gripping, intense, hooked me and kept me. A great job of portraying the messeage of homeschoolling persecution. Very well done!
01/19/06
Excellent dramatization of things that are actually going on in Germany, and other EU countries.
01/20/06
You communicated the sad facts in a gripping tale. Well done. yeggy
01/20/06
I'm with Yeggy. You've managed to convey the facts by showing us rather than telling us and the message comes across loud and clear. Well done.
01/20/06
Another excellent piece ... as we have all come to expect from you! Looks like it could be yet another winner! And the message was right on. Perfect!
01/21/06
Incredible story, masterfully written! You handle words with the precision of an architect and the heart of an artist. Absolutely wonderful, Amy!
01/21/06
Wow! Fantastic writing! I am so thankful that at this time in America we are able to homeschool without the police knocking down our door. Let's pray it never comes to that!
01/22/06
I like the international flavour of this piece, as well as the strong message it communicates. Well done!
01/22/06
The typo and the word left out seemed to become a "big nothing" after reading the story. A very interesting read.
01/24/06
Well done! This is definitely a subject that is "close to my heart." I may have to try my hand at this kind of story someday. Good job!