The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/18
I love these kinds of God stories. They are so faith building. Thank you for writing.
04/26/18
This is a great "witness" for the LORD. Great job with this.

Blessings~
04/26/18
Awesome!
04/26/18
Amazing! :)
04/27/18
Very encouraging. I love this story, seeing how God works things out when we pray.
05/03/18
I love how God makes a way when there is no way! Thanks for sharing
05/03/18
Don't you love how God opens doors no man can close? Well done! Congrats on your well deserved placement.
This is a great story. I know it's based on the truth so it truly shows how amazing God is.
I'd urge you to make your opener pop some more. For example:
Closing my eyes, I massaged my temples and exhaled loudly. I knew this moment would come; everyone has them, but why now? Everything had been going so well, but now we were struggling for the first time since our wedding.
Something like that might make it pop a bit more and paint a picture. You did great writing on topic while delivering a message. Congratulations on your 2nd place ribbon. Happy Dance!