The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/18
There are probably a lot of people that can relate to your story. Finding time alone with God is not easy in this fast pasted world. Blessings!
01/28/18
Great job presenting your real life example and the lessons you are learning. You actually had me thinking you were serious with the first couple of sentences ( since there are actually people who like and work well under pressure) until i realized the direction you were going. I enjoyed your challenge of fasting from negative thoughts.
Thank you for showing how easy it is to get "caught up" in folly, while ignoring what the Lord has to offer us.

God Bless.

02/01/18
Hello Lisa. Your entry has been highlighted in our new Someone to Watch showcase (posted in the forums, on Facebook, and Twitter). Keep rising to the Challenge. http://bit.ly/2DSNpaM Deb (FaithWriters and Breath of Fresh Air Press)
02/01/18
Loved the natural flow of your story - though discovering that your first para was a tad short in honesty was a sad moment for me.
Thanks for a funny but challenging read, and congrats on your placing.
02/01/18
Loved the natural flow of your story - though discovering that your first para was a tad short in honesty was a sad moment for me.
Thanks for a funny but challenging read, and congrats on your placing.
You have a delightful sense of humor. I chuckled several times. The only red ink I have is tiny. You slipped from first person to the universal you in the opening of the third paragraph. Switching the word your to the would fix that. Your message is a great one, and something I think we all need to remember. You made me stop and think.
Congratulations for ranking 2nd in your level and 11th overall. Happy Dance!
02/04/18
As I read the first paragraph, I recognized myself, except for the loving it part. Then I read on and laughed. Yep, this IS me. :D Great motivational writing! You connected with me in one of my weaknesses.
02/07/18
I totally recognized the stress in the first paragraph. I couldn't understand how someone could love that until I realized that they didn't. :) Good, encouraging piece of writing! Congratulations on your well-deserved placing!