The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/18
I like your story I remember another one where a man gave his son a bible and he refused to open it and years later he found that his dad had given him the car he wanted, many years of wasted regrets.
So glad you found out early. praying for my scientist daughter to see the light.
Good story kept my interest.
Judy
01/11/18
I enjoyed your story very much. Grandparents will do most anything to get their grandchildren saved. Nice of him to help out with college expences also. Blessings
01/12/18
Ha! Love the way Grandpa hid money in the Bible!! Never to be found unless it was opened!
It seems that the time element switched back and forth somewhat. It made it harder to tell if you were writing in present tense or past tense.

It is a nice story though.