The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/17
Good job with this allegorical ( is that the right word for it) poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Yes, in this world we will have problems. This is part of God's curse on the earth found in Genesis.

One thing I might have written even though my shoes were drying is the sun was to "wipe the mud off my shoes" just a little latter. Mud would more dramatically illustrate the struggle of the storm.

I liked the story all the way through.

Keep writing what you enjoy to write.