The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/06
There's a kernel of something here. This actually reads like more of a synopsis of a much much larger work. Just one question ..... where can I buy the robots to replace my children? ;-)
01/20/06
A very interesting story, but I would have set it a bit further into the future than 4 years to be a bit more "believable" :) As a big scifi fan, I enjoyed it. A bit "scary" but a good read :)
Pat Guy  
01/22/06
Scary thought! The apathy of the times! The unquestionable acceptence of being expendable. Sad. Our children feel this way about what the parents fill their lives with - everything but them.