The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/17
A very good use of the subject.
05/22/17
You had some wonderful thoughts about the song and lyrics.

If we don't escape this world with fantasies about meeting Christ and experiencing the glories of heaven, maybe our faith is a little anemic and we need to revisit our hope a little. "Faith is substance of things hoped for."

Thank your for keeping us focused. A good story. God bless.
You make some great points in this. I remember thinking Heaven would be like church--quite dull and not at all relevant to my life. Since then, I've developed a relationship with Jesus and know it will be quite intimate. I think you nailed the topic. I do want to caution you about using lyrics without permission. Because songs are so short, it can be easy to infringe on copyrights. It's okay if the song is in the public domain (usually old hymns like Amazing Grace). Deb has an article about this on the message boards. It will also challenge you to think outside the box and use your own words and thoughts to inspire the reader. I know you have inspired me many times before. You have a great foundation and I know the Holy Spirit has great plans for you and your writing. Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level. Happy Dance!