The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really lovely, I could picture ture the beauty of God's world and the miracles that occur every day,
04/29/17
Beautiful!
Blessings~
I loved the writing of this poem. One stand out in the poeam...we will taste the music. I have often said I can smell rain when God has entered the room.
04/29/17
I really enjoyed this and envied your ability to describe creation so well and in rhyming verse. Well done and blessings on your writing.
05/01/17
I enjoyed your poem very much. Some really good verses. I think, and I am not an expert by any means on poetry, but it seemed to me that the metre (meter) was off some. It was a good read for me. God bless.
What an amazing gift you have, the ability to see through God's eyes and transform it into words that the world can understand.

I look forward to the nest time I read your works.