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This is a great story. My heart ached for the boy and the turtle. I thought maybe Mom should have spoke up a bit so ER when the turtle was thrown on the table, but not having 4 boys I won't judge. My daughter accidentally hurt a newborn kitten and to this day (she's 23), it still bothers her. There's definitely a time for yelling and a time for consoling. Good job.
Having three sons of my own and another three stepsons and a step-daughter I could really relate to the saga and drama. Children and their pets learn such a lot, and give us lessons in God's purpose and provision. Well done.
04/23/17
Awww...poignant and impressive story.

Blessings~