The Official Writing Challenge
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This is great. You had me chuckling several times. My only advice is don't use so many exclamation points. Let your great word choice do your exclaiming. I thought for sure when the MC got to work, it would be a holiday or the weekend. I was delighted you didn't go that way. Your ending was perfect.
04/23/17
I loved this - humour with disaster and a hope-filled ending looking to a better tomorrow. Blessings.
04/23/17
Excellent!

Blessings~