The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/17
I liked it. Good Job! How often do we as Christians dream of sitting at the feet of Jesus. Good hook, I think some sentences could have been combined with others to make a paragraph. Enjoyed. God bless.
03/20/17
A soft encouraging reminder that Jesus' priorities are certainly different that ours.
So often children are seen as a burden or unimportant. Not so with the Lord. I enjoyed your story and your title caught me.
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 16 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
03/26/17
I enjoyed hearing the story from the perspective of a child. It has a great message. Congrats on your 3rd place ranking in your level.