The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/17
Modern life does get really crazy at times!
The pacing of this is frentic and perfect for the story. Normally, I'd suggest narrative in between the dialog, but here I think "breaking the rules" really worked. I even felt a bit out of breath as I read. Great way to immerse the story in the topic.